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as amazing as ur erotica, if true love pure emotions are added it would be sooo much better, ie this setuation with lumina. i love the erotic scens perfectly writin. but if it was following or based on actual apprciation and build on actual love it would even be better. do u know whay no one ever ever forgets thier first love, or thier first time, bc its special its the first time they have had these feelings and emotions, just like most times u eat something new, it becomes the standard of that dish, even if u eat tge same dish and everyone says its better, ull always want it to taste like that first time. ahh am rambling 😂. anyways, what i wanted to say all along is that am really enjoying luminas arc.
just left a review, giving u the best erotic scene king. but here ill say it again it was a great scene, and the story is really intruging so far. i just hope the mc will have some growth, to really make the story shine. and on a personal prefrence, i really really hope he never ends up with any of these ladys. first he is a good guy, and they r 50 years older than him, curropting him, and using him, yes he is getting some benfits, but still if they actully liked him then fine. but using him and keep planing on using him further calling him a puppy, just too much, even if that changes later, it will always be in the back of my mind that these ladies r no good. he really deserves some good pure girls, not evil old used up hags. but those old used up hags, r good for him to practice, so he can take good care of his good girls. and it would just be karma, just like in the clothing shop, the fat lady wanted to scam him and he scamed her. it would be amazing at the end when and if it end up that all these ladys wanted to use him, will end up used by him instead.
tame 😂😂, more like bend over lick their feet and spread those cheeks to be ponded like a simp.
watch she will get 10 r18 chapters, and no who*es the next morning. when Nadia got half a chapter. and Anna aisha and lilly shared 2 and half chapter then packed with the grabage.
this is a good concept, i really would not mind reading, but the execution needs a lot of work. first she likes him but does not trust him, no justfication, she belives her butler, then she is attcked, no reason as far as i know points to the butler being involved. she thros him to be imprsoned as a miner for being in her room naked, and he thought it was ok to be there how was he convnced to enter her room naked, did he not live there fir a while and knew its not normal to enter a girls room naked. then without justifaction, she sleeps with him, when she imprsined him for just walking into her room naked. i really would like to read this. but even tho i love fantasy and thats what i read, and i can sespend belife about magic and cultivation, i need the charchters to act some what normal.
ingred did mot get her turn 😭
see this is fair, first is first, thats how thing should be, no way to rationlize favertasim. in the end it will and should ruine the dynamics.
his who*e wives spent less than a chapter with him, but this whore has spent more chapter on bed than his who*e wives.
now she is awsome, qute, and brutal. unlike the discusting who*re hanna.
why is there other women in the story? u should have just had hanna if thats all u care about. have all the other r*ped tourtured and killed, and have him sit under hanna so she can pis* and $hit on his face all day, while she gives head to the rest of u universe, would be a great plot.