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Hello, sorry for the late response. The new title's name is Realm Kings (M e g a n o v e l) I'm still planning on publishing book 1 some time this year, your free copy is reserved 💕

I like the story so far, initially the writing was a bit awkward maybe because it's in a first person perspective which can be difficult to write... However as the story progresses it gets noticeably better. within the first five chapters there is an idea of the power scaling and how things work in the world. Not much details about the system yet but I hope to learn more as the book progresses. Very interested in seeing how the initial misunderstanding is cleared and how the MC will get his revenge.

Stopped reading because of the stereotype in the first chapter. Instant turn off... Please do research on what is ok and what's not. You'll lose readers if this continues.

Noah and entourage are annoying

Interesting... MC taking interest in the extra

ooo interesting 🤔 cupid... I thought they were going to make him do beta testing for virtual reality of something

I love the first chapter!!! will read more then review ❤️

pffft straight... mhmm

.... 🤔... she kinda has a point... I guess