Tyrant_Bear

You ruined your own novel. I really liked the first 3 chapter and even had high expectations for the fanfiction but it ruined everything for me when he let Liu Fei go after trying to kill him. I mean why should he let someone go after having towards himself. Saying that he let her go because she is his future wife is complete nonsense. He isnt the real Lin Feng after all.

Expect at least one more chapter today

Thanks for telling me this everytime. I will start to read it before publishing it.

Its corrected now.

Sigh... Sry am doing it pretty late now. I will correct it.

It depends on how much time I have.

Tell me if I missed one.

Done.

Urrutia is the mtl version of Ultear....

Thanks dor reminding me. I will correct it. I probably forgot to write the right name.