Seamus_Lyles

Sword Saint**

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This is one of the great ones, would definitely recommend. The plot starts slow and may leave you wanting for details, but quickly makes up for it. The breadcrumbs of mysterious lore will keep you sucked in and itching to learn more. The world building is solid and the characters are well-developed. The author explains events and concepts well, without giving too much away. The power system has a proper amount of complexity and balance. The MC of the story kind of falls under the "chosen one" archetype, and is given a bit of plot armour, but it's not horribly unreasonable or extensive. Grammatical/punctuational errors are sparse, and those that can be found don't affect readability. Overall, this novel has great potential. The writing is of good quality, the story is interesting, and the world feels real. 8/10 would definitely recommend.

this screams "Cypher sold his soul"

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