_ShiningMoonLight_

Pretty good. I look forward to seeing how turns out.

What's the raw/original title of this novel?

This if f-ing hype not gonna lie, I remember reading the original novel when I was in high school.

Bro I'll be your patre0n but there's gotta be 20 chapters because at the moment there only 5 and I wanna read more.

Novels really get. I just kinda wish he would call the benders and not magicians. Besides that, the novels are great so far

someone outed themselves...

Bro's patre@n be scummy as shit, 55 ch for $100.

That doctor's so unrealistic, if you got some kid with a reality altering quirk in his office he's pushing the red button for the government to come and quarantine the kid or pull out the glock to finish the job himself.

Pretty good. If the translation quality was improved, It would be even better.

I think it's a good attempt at a Pokemon Fanfic, and I could see why some people might enjoy this story. After reading up until he gets his starter, the thing that stood out to me is that MC literally doesn't talk to anyone. Well, he obviously monologs to us, which wouldn't be a problem, but that's all the first 3 chapters are... just a monologs. Kinda feels like we're more reading a journal written by the MC than an actual story. Feels real dry and non description when the MC doesn't talk about what it is like living in a new world. What's the difference, how does the living situation affect him, and what does his surroundings feel/look like? (To me, the story feels more like an outline for what's meant to happen without it actually giving details and descriptions of things affecting / happening / going on in the MC's life / surroundings.)