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why make him look like a regular human, just makes the story really generic in my opinion

Man I really saw potential in this with the whole goblin thing going on, but like every generic MHA fanfic, it brings in the ability to copy quirks instead focusing on the characters own attributes. Just a cop out way to go about a quick power upgrade and is really uncreative at this point. So much could've been done with his goblin side

This is really overused, limits creativity. There is so much stuff you could've did with this but of course when people run out of ideas they choose the "Copy Quirk" bs

He just saw body parts being splattered near his face.

Yeah I dont really know how they are well respected. Maybe they dont have many other kingdoms on this land

That is not what the skill says. Its says it needs a certain amount of mana to use the skill and will continue to use said mana until the USER cuts it off. So the user activates and deactivates the skill therefore it is a Toggled Active ability.

Why is he feeling sorry for a guy that tried to threaten someone with a gun but had the situation turn around on him??

It has been the undoing of many kings, I see it happening to her early

Tf is she denying everything for...She has the mental age of what 47? she certainly has some more developing to do

I believe that is a sentence with multiple words?