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Ts is so tuff ngl

Great chapter looking forward to the next chapter! Lots of tension built up great work!

Sorry book is called Naval Gatcha System. The book isn’t exactly the same but follows the exact same premise. On an island, does a maritime mission and finds a dragon under the ship in the hull.

This is just a copy of a other book with a few adjustments. It’s the books called I reincarnated with a naval system or something like that. Don’t steal people’s work.

Great adjustments! Looking forward to seeing some interactions from outside powers in the near future (If those exist)!

The only thing that is confusing and inconsistent is the MC is a WW2 soldier but automatically has a country on par with modern world. Like the AR-15 was not an available weapon in WW2 so if you could add some explanation that would fill some plot gaps. Or at least add a second where the MC is suprised about the new technology he seems very uninterested in the modern technology.

This is exactly what you’d expect for a good SCP fic. I’m not huge on critiquing a solid novel so I won’t do any of that. There’s good grammar and an engaging storyline. Give it a try I highly recommend especially if you like the faction building genre. Good job author!

You’re doing a great job! I look forward to each chapter. Don’t focus on nit picky stuff just focus on how you want to shape the story.

Nice milestone!

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola