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Si. Sisí. Sísisi. SIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII WELL DONE AUTHOR, KEEP UP THE GOOD THING, MAKE HAREM. LET THOSE TWO DOLLS STAY WITH KEN YESSSS ...

Una historia que se volvió aburrida rápidamente [img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]

YES, HAREM. IF THE OTHER PRINCESSES DON'T WANT HAREM, THEY CAN GO SEE BARBIE OR SOMETHING ELSE THEY LIKE.

The first 20 chapters are basically The Korra Series, but with a few changes here and there, meaning the story follows the original plot, the author just adds a couple more things. (and I don't mean improvements, quite the opposite). After the first 20 chapters, the MC goes traveling the world, having encounters with OCs that nobody cares about.

Maybe it's time you made the protagonist a little more mature, take things a little more lightly. I feel like everyone empathized with the MC, and seeing him suffer is burning them out... For my part, I liked this dramatic twist, I'm looking forward to reading more.[img=recommend]

Esto es tan estupido....

The truth is that this story lacks a lot. Let's start with his powers, he's basically an op monster, which wouldn't be a problem if it weren't for the fact that the story focuses more on him receiving power, and hardly even uses them. The writing and narration leave much to be desired. It is mostly a dump of information where it says what he does, while the dialogues are scarce and too simple, as if the characters had no life, they were just AI.

Pretty good, actually. I admit I didn't have faith in it because of the first few chapters, since I thought it would be an Adams world where the protagonist wouldn't interact with the characters in that world, But in the end I was wrong, before the protagonist met the characters of Wednesday, there was a rather interesting introduction, not at all boring, well written and not long I give this fic a 10/10

Too boring, too rambling, too slow, too problematic. There is no balance in this story, it just shows a cheap drama that is basically a protagonist complaining. Good grammar, bad narrative. The first chapter is interesting, then there's a bit of drama, and then some more, and then the cheap drama never ends.