Stoicist

Hey Gabriel! How’s it going? To answer your question as simply as possible: there aren’t any “liquid rivers” in the far north. The extreme cold, combined with the Frozen Forest and the geographical position of Stahl and its neighboring countries, makes that impossible. The region’s temperatures stay well below zero—think of it like Antarctica—but thanks to the presence of mana, living beings are able to survive. Water in this area exists more as permafrost, so while there may be small pools or even underground rivers, there are no long surface rivers flowing through the kingdom and ending in the sea. And, you are absolutely right, rivers are basically the starting point of most civilizations. Yet, Stahl is a bit different, similar to the most extreme points of Russia.

I will try to do that! Thanks for the support!

That's a great point! The next phase of the novel we will focus more on that, giving more depth to the context of agriculture, fishing and trading. (And, of course army). I will take a lot of your comment to reflect on it! Seriously, I appreciate it!

It's not something that will drag more than 1 chapter, but it's necessary to open the world and start filling the plotholes, opening the space for the empires down South. At first, it would be easy to just kill him, but it would be forced for the next phases of the story, and Henry easily managed to get through Aritreia, which makes it quite easy. Now, in the next 2-3 chapters, Luak will fall in his hands and the empires down South will begin to move.

That's a good feedback! Up to this point, I haven't really thought about disclosing the size of Stahl's royal treasure, since the kingdom is like a property of the throne and he could use and control all source of incomes. However, that's a good feedback and I will begin putting on the numbers. Thank you!

Corrected! Thanks for the feedback!

Thank you for the answer! So, that's because I was trying to break the 'fourth wall', where the future MC is interacting with the reader or with himself. Also, I tried to create a dynamic chapter and speed up those kinda boring stuff that happens in the beginning of reincanation novels. Despite being confused, did you think this chapter kept you interested or nah? Thanks a lot!

Hey Tiovaughn! How are you doing? Can you explain more? Why do you think its confusing? This is a new writing style that I am testing. So, all feedback is welcome! Thank you for the comment!

Yes! Henry only had the confidence to use it after Luna had stabilized it, previously, there was chance of exploding and Henry didn't want it to explode in the middle of his army haha. And, just saying, buckle up, because the plot will get faster.

With the dwarves, we will soon see a new world.