Voidir

Time to find the one piece!

The story is interesting and the character interactions are fun to read. Just a few points of criticism: grammar and name issues, MC's name keeps changing and there are some metaphors that are hard to understand. The story is quite slow paced. Where I left, after all the free chapters, it just focuses on the group MC leaves and there isn't much of MC doing really anything. It would have been nice if it got to more action and see how the main character deals with enemies before the chapters are locked. Also, MC is a bit of a pushover, I don't know how he was so content on being treated like a dog/slave for that many years by that group, despite being a transmigrator who has knowledge on this world. But, I guess it makes it satisfying when he leaves and they all regret it as he literally did everything! from massaging their feet, cooking, planning, and being a leader. Also, I was a bit turned off when he got the 'useless' God as a companion cliche. Moreover, the God got gender bent into a 'panda' girl. As for panda, I have no idea if it's a metaphor or not, if she really is a panda demi human, or it meant panda as in how she looks. Otherwise, she's not too annoying, and the dynamic between the two is funny.

Ty for chapter

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that's so foul xd

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