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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

If you're looking for a promising story where fiction becomes reality, this might be just for you. The grammar so far has been really consistent with little to no mistakes. Inconsistent grammar is a common thing on this app, so I'm glad this one is different. The worldbuilding has also been pretty good. The creatures introduced so far have been standard, but the descriptions and actions are really vivid. They aren't many chapters right now, but the one so far have been really enjoyable. I hope the author turns this into something great.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Abyss Online: The Rise of Zero" presents a thrilling and immersive storyline that captures the essence of the gaming world. The concept of a dedicated player transforming into the final boss adds a unique twist to the traditional gaming narrative, making it an intriguing and captivating read.Abyss Online: With its compelling premise, intense competition, and immersive world-building, this novel is sure to captivate both gaming enthusiasts and fans of action-packed storytelling. This is what I've felt after the first 20 or so chapters. I can't wait to experience what happens next.

(Review is based off 1-11) The cover art, tags, and synopsis were more than enough for me to try this novel out. I'm a simple guy. I see dark/ horror and system and I read. Fo the few chapters that this novel have out they have been really juicy. The writing so far has been very clean and crisp with little to no mistakes, and the overall story has read really smooth so far. I liked the drunken part, but stuff really turns up after chapter 12. I like how Levin is a double edge sword. This read has been really enjoyable so far, and I'm looking forward to the future version of it. My review will change when there are more chapters out.