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bye bye, won't miss you
No problem, man. yeah, the story ain't bad, but the author didn't do it justice. In later chapters when something is really bad I do rewrite the scene but that is only late in book 1
I can look once this book is done on patreon
Thanks, hope you enjoy it.
I know, I changed it to archery later on
It gets pretty good later on. This book was written over a few years, so I think the first chapter was literary, the first thing he wrote.
what do you think will happen when he detransforms and that little bear is still around
I'll fix this
I remember it to be