PuddingLord

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eshhhh. Hurts like shit. had to put some type of cream on and when it touched a cracked part I leart it had alcohol in it, the neighborhood kid has lesrnt new swears.

...check the description reaaalllll quick, I have a feeling you missed something.

I recently started working as an apprentice so I can get an engineering degree and I spent the previous day in the sun while being blindingly white and living close to the equator.

One, meh. That wouldn't really be the omnitrix anymore. Two, we like the estetics, and I have noticed most Ben 10 fanfic authors are fans of the OG. Three, having it as something like that cuts off a lot of avenues or plot. Your ideas would make a boring story that would require most of the book to be filler to be interesting and at that point whats the point.

ah ,yeah. I believe I made this mistake once or twice.

Also thanks for telling me about the amor -> amo thing. I have been picking up some Spanish while doing this for the last few months because I have to find what the original word is what could be its meaning, and what that would be in English. And while I won't immediately fix this as I am already at chapter 32 of book 2 I will keep it in mind and if I do another mass editing day I'll come back and fix it.

Yeah, I thought that was the case. Thanks. Thought I did say it was a translation. I just fix all the mistakes that comes with the translation. Also, seeing as you are Spanish, is there a word that is commonly used in the Spanish language that is replaceable for both gender's pronouns? It's the only way I can justify all the pronoun mistakes.

Her father died at the end of the third season, this is before the second.

This reminds me so much of the beginning of Nanomancer - snow girl