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Please try to write your pronoun rightly ....in here you will see you write they instead his..... overall good ... keep up the good work... keep on updating and good luck
I like your novel very much but I don't like mc constantly being weird with his phycology ...also in chapter 23 you have some misspelling..you wrote mc father as tim instead of ted
yes...or at least have to have something to represent hestia...like make the dorm area as hestia colony...and please post a picture of the buildings..
in previous chapter we see some difference in state point like intelligent and charm. please clarify
where is the first book? what is it's name?
what does level percent meant?
I think you should first correct your cultivation level in the novel...gu yuan is a dou saint then he should want to be dou di not dou hung or emperor
Thanks for the information and I like your novels very much... guild wars is my favorite novel
Why is it that he didn't have any upgrades in his std? When Dante entered in the blood tempering realm his gene sequence unlock and he upgrades his parameters but now he is in perfection realm but no upgrades in std or gene sequence.... what is the parameters for unlocking gene sequence?
I really like your story.....but please try to update more frequently...i won't say much about the storyline...as it's already messed up.. after all the 72 pillers of demons are made by lillth ...but now it's under mc protection so I don't know what future will have unfold onto us....but I like the way you try to make your story ongoing in completely different route...for that I appreciate your time and efforts.....we will also support you..so don't drop it