LeopardPride

I really like this story. The characters are written very well and the story is too. I like that are mermaids, it reminds me a bit of the Little Mermaid, except the male version and more modern and realistic. Keep up the good work.

It's really good so far, I really like the characters and the storyline so far. There are a few errors in it, but nothing that takes away from the book, you can still understand what it's trying to say. Author, I really like this and I hope you continue.

Will's reaction to something that only reminds him of Jayden has got me worried. In no way do I blame him for being afraid, he should be, but it makes me wonder how he's going to react to actually see Jayden. It makes me a little nervous to see what's going to happen. Good luck, Will, stay strong! And thank you, author, for the chapter.

Overall, this is a really good story, one I would definitely recommend. While it can be fairly slow while the MC is growing up, the author still manages to spend that time developing characters and making the story really interesting. I like that this story doesn't just jump into the romance right away. There are parts of the story that I think the author could've drawn out a little more like the MC's time at school, but, in the end, it is the author's decision. Author, I really like your story and I encourage you to continue writing.