Dominion_Sage

Ok thank you for your feedback I am gonna try to add a little bit more about the characters and their personalities soon 👍

Thanks for the feedback! I am trying to go a little slower with the story and reading other novels to see how they do it effectively but it might still take a while to get there. Still, I hope that you have fun reading the novel.

Sorry I was sick the entire last week so I couldn't get any new chapters up but starting Wednesday, I will start updating again.

Sorry I was sick the entire last week so I couldn't get any new chapters up but starting Wednesday, I will start updating again.

Sorry about that, I uploaded the new chapter.

Sorry about that, I uploaded the new chapter.

I am trying to make sure I upload on time every week first then I might focus on making the chapters longer. Thx for reading!

I am trying to make my upload consistent first then I might focus on making my chapters longer. Thanks for reading!

Thanks 👍😁

Hello, Author here, This is my second time writing a novel. I hope you like it. I know that there are a lot of improvements that I can make so I would appreciate it if you could write down what I can do to improve the story and give suggestions for the story.