Iskarriot

An interesting idea for a story. Could be a decent read if not for authors cringe humor and intolerable looser MC. 5.5/10

An okay fanfic, but it suffers from comedic elements that do not fit the theme of Warhammer.................................................

The problem with Hiruzen stems from the OG Naruto and how he was whitewashed there with the introduction/retcon of Danzo. Basically, the complex and gray Hiruzen was split into two characters, with Danzo being the 'darker' part.

Hope it's finally over. The village politics and all those council characters are so boring that i started to miss the good old days when story focused on stuff that really matters: training

Cuz if you are strong enough to be a hokage candidate then the position gives you no tangible benefits. What village can offer at this point that a kage level powerhouse can't take for himself?

Can't you think of a new joke? Lazy Shikaku has been around for hundreds of chapters already

This is what i dislike about this fanfic. Any time MC proposes something, author has a need to write thoughts/reactions of everyone in the room.

well.. Danzo will start to exist after Shippuden time-skip so it's not weird he's not here

Hope (if Hiruzen survives) you'll introduce some conflict between Hiruzen and MC. Stuff like Hiruzen uncovering some of the mc's secrets and deeming Mc as a danger to the village.

Plz no. It got boring hundreds of chapters ago. One of the reasons I'm glad Hiruzen is out is because of it