Ishkanoif

I actually struggled to read this, the idea is cool but the writing is god awful, it's just way to cringe and it feels as if it was written by a child. overall not bad but definitely not for everyone

It was a cool idea but I'm convinced the author hasn't watched or read naruto, it's not even AU at this point, author is just making shit up

it's not horrible but it feels like it was written by a child, the dialogue is weird and a bit cringe at times, and the story is extremely fast paced with the mc being able to run faster than light a couple chapters in but other than that it's decently solid

+1

thanks for the chapters

thanks for the chapter 👍

thanks for the chapter 👍

thanks for the chapter 👍

I thought hypnotic would be a good father after the whole rehab situation but I was wrong, hope he gets some of that endeavor character development

thanks for the chapter 👍