William_Boich
Lv4
2020-05-27 加入Canada
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William_Boich3 years ago發表10/10 -IGN It just works - Todd Howard Would recommend it to my wife and kids - JFK Akane Best Girl
- William_Boich3 years ago回復 T0X1N
Halleluja! One of the best stories has returned [img=recommend]
- William_Boich3 years ago發表
White T. Poison
- William_Boich3 years ago發表
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- William_Boich4 years ago發表
This is the place where the pronouns switch
- William_Boich4 years ago回復 Zan_M
The gender is confusing in the scissor attack part. the pronouns if Leone is a boy should be he, his, him ect not her, hers, she, ect
- William_Boich4 years ago發表
Weren't they brothers in the first chapter? Now Leone has been gender-bent or was that always the case?
- William_Boich4 years ago發表
You should get him to make some golems with the “Piertotum Locomotor” spell. Make the Tin man, The Lion and the Scarecrow.