Barnacleboy

Cool, still not for me. But thank for the spoon feeding I guess. While I’m not going to read it keep posting, most novels are only as popular as much as they are updated.

Based on what I’ve read this far, this novel is not very polished. In the beginning, he seems to have regained his memories, or at least understands that he’s been framed for some reason. He even has the whole migraine and falls over trope that happens in almost all transmigration storys, but then it’s revealed that he knows absolutely nothing about his past. This leads to situations where his only family member (his sister) noticing something is wrong with him. And to be frank I don’t mind a transmigration story where the main character doesn’t receive the predecessors memories. There have been a few storys that have done this successfully, but from what I’ve read this isn’t one of them. His sister finding out leads to a dramatic fight where he somehow convinces her that even though he’s not the brother she hated (yes, hated) over the years, she still needs him. A completely nonsensical development, or at the very least one I just can’t grasp my head around. Your brother you once loved who turned into a villainous dark mage over the years, killed your father and took over the house, making you live through untold hardships and is suddenly possessed. Because he said trust me because I didn’t hurt you, all is good? I’m sorry but it seems like the protagonist has already fallen into a game over. Why would she not seek help from others to oust her brother and take over as the new family head seeing as the entity is not even her brother. Beyond that, there are a lot of things that are just confusing in the novel left as mysteries for the author to reveal slowly over time, but because of how nonsensical the novel has been so far it just leads to me feeling annoyed. Congratulations for the author for making it to second place of the power stone category as of December 7th, but this novels is really not for me. I hope you find success and push through, while this novels is not for me I’m sure there will be others who find this a good read.

I’m not one to complain much about a fanfiction let alone a translation, but seriously, you gotta stick with the English names. You literally translating it to English. Your doing a great job at everything else but names are killin me.

It literally say 2-10 people is a harem

Has he already released the new Pokemon games?

Who’s head?

Thx for the chap

Love the plot twist. Thanks for the chapters

The writing quality, update stability, and character design are all pretty good. The only thing I have to comment about is the world. I really have no idea what it’s like so far. The only info I have is that there are sects, a protagonist, and there was a spar on a mountain that created a sword lotus. The concept of the story is great though. And I might be wrong but the fact that he sees things pop up in comic format as information is interesting. At least, that’s what I imagine while reading it. As of 27 chapters in I definitely recomend.

Now this is just false man. A light kick is just a kick with less force put into it. Why would you change your form?