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Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality
The sentence used leant, not lent (at the time of my reading). Leant is a valid past tense of lean.
caretaker should be Filch.
Are some of the paragraphs out of order? It seems he went to bed, got up put on school robes. Then greeted Hedwig, talked with roommate then pulled out his pj's and went to bed again.
Thought gobstones was more like marbles than chess?
From late Latin meaning Pearl?
Was this meant to be "shop's front" instead of "chop's front"
You might consider a replacement for 'schedule' as there are no corresponding times or dates provided for the steps in his plan.