Artem_Trey

so you're writing a cultivation novel and you don't know what a dantian is?

not how puberty works, you really shouldn't have just mentioned the statement

At some point in time his battle pets just became pets

you lived for 126 years that's a century not centuries

this is what I mean by simple yet entertaining stories, it's funny. The Grammar might not be the best, spelling sometimes off but the story and the flow of the plot, full points. It fulfilled the most basic aspect of any good story, it's bloody entertaining and the author didnt make the story all about the golden finger/cheat it's about the people. Unlike some idiots.

wtf doew disguise have to do with eavesdropping

seriously 😑 do I even have to say it? doubling, seriously 😒

don't use "only", it literally translates to "not enough" or "not satisfactory". example: "i only got 5 apples." as opposed to "i got 5 Apples."

when you start using fractions of other fractions then you should know you're wrong, just bloody specify or be vague as fuck, either say 7 and a half minute or just 7 minutes or be vague and say half the time it would take the resident 6th realmer to get there. a quarter of an hour is already a fraction, saying half of that is just dumb.

when did MC's start talking so much, it's annoying and making bets that don't benefit you at all, shouldn't you like earn something from it