Mattigician

superman killed his general-uncle so yes he does kill out of necessity

When on earth did superman begin solving a problems like batman. I finally thought I'd found a fun superman fanfic. Should have guessed.

And he suddenly knows the kryptonian he's been feeling uneasy about. just perfect.

Quit the 'tense atmosphere' and 'not quite rights' it's annoying now, feels like scrubbed AI.

Teenage superman shivering? Completely out of character.

fantastic

Absolutely wonderful, among many warhammer fics I've had the chance to see this one really seems special. Nice timing, apt transitions what more can a guy want for. Waaaaaggghhhh!

trigger happy idiot.

Can so l stands but turns into a wet sock after 30 seconds running? Just stop and get some real life experience.

Really good start just rewatch the series and rewrite from Chap. 3 onwards don't fret about AI, just remember to paint it over in your own words. Good luck.