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The plot and characters are amazing. I enjoyed reading the book. My suggestion is to smash the length of the paragraphs a little bit, because there were places where I got tired while reading. Keep writing!

While I was reading, I realized that I was absorbed by the novel. This is a very important detail for me. The fiction of the characters and the narration of the world further increased my desire to read the book. I like your book and I am adding it to my collection. I wish you continued success

Thank you very much for your valuable comment.

I really liked the flow of the book. The characters are well introduced and the plot is very well designed. Although there are some grammatical mistakes, I really liked his book. I will stay in pursuit. I added it to my collection!

Thank you so much. Keep reading!

It is a wonderful language of expression. While reading, I felt like I was in the story. The fiction and the world are pretty well worked out. In summary, I really liked this novel, I strongly recommend you to read it.

Thank you for your valuable opinion. Keep reading!

Thank you very much for your valuable opinion.

You need to improve your grammar. Other than that, the plot and characters of the book are pretty good. While reading, I constantly wonder about the rest. I mean, read the Book patiently and you will be absolutely satisfied.