Kelator

Shame you have stopped writing this, gave me RI vibes. Great read! The only negative, that I can think of, is the lack of detail between time skips. I really enjoy reading a more detailed story and this one lacks detail. Not once (up to chapter 10) did we read about anything menial. I would have loved to read more about the MC's daily routine. Food, inn room, checking the local stores, baths, ext. Again while those aren't important, the reader knows they're are happening and by writing it, it gives life to the story. From my experience, experienced writers will use fillers. These minor tasks that living people do, in my opinion, are great fillers that while not a necessity,(as you've shown) they give a realism that I believe is great addition. Heck, sometimes writers do such a well job of explaining the food the MC is eating that it will make you drool in real life. Thank you.

I don't understand a lot of things, first being this is a transmigration novel yet not. This is the opposite of those novels where the side character becomes the MC. This a story where the MC is actually the side character, at least to 350+.

What A shame, A shame I tell you! This is one of those stories that really hooks you in at the start. The writing is great, the story feels fresh, and at least at the start the MC seemed like an actual ruthless antihero MC. Then suddenly we get a beta, S@mp MC. What happen, did the Author suddenly change his mind after 100chapters? I understand the MC needing to struggle, to get into it, shed some tears along the way, but this is tragic. Don't get me wrong 350+ chapters in and maybe he'll grow some balls within 600+ but I highly doubt it with how the story has progressed. It's also one of those slow progress, slow burn novels, so we get to suffer longer. While I don't mind a slow story, god I can't stand this coward. He's so pathetic that I don't even feel sorry for him... One of those stories where the Author does a great job at making you hate the MC. It's Tragic, someone Arrest this Author and Make him rewrite the story with an MC and not a side boot licker.. I can't recommend this to anyone.

I don't think being OP or not makes the story enjoyable, it's the MC, writing, and story. The Author got two of the three right, but the MC is just not likeable. So far he's a Weak to Weak beta male s@mp, borderline g@y MC. The amount of time he comments on how attractive other men are is shocking. Once, maybe twice, but the author went too far in my opinion. I also really dislike how provocative females are showing obvious Interests towards the MC yet he cowers. Two chapters later he's now drooling on them like a sex fiend, commenting on their perfect bodies, makes no sense. Maybe he just hasn't come out of the closet yet lol.

Makes no sense, from the slums, but one would think he was a harvard student lol.

Honestly I'm surprised and ecstatic by how bold this author is. In 2022 while the vocal minority would hate some of this, I love it. It's so real and a welcomed breath of fresh air. Compared to your last novel, you are not holding back any punches! First off, the Grammar is top notch as always. The magic system while being a little confusing at the starts becomes quite interesting. The MC is likable so far. I'm only on chapter 20, but so far if the quality doesn't go down too much I'd give this a 4.7/5 as there is always room to improve. I only gave it that rating because the first few chapters where confusing and might turn off some people, but if you can get past chapter 10 the author starts to slowly reveal the magic system. Honestly I love slow burn when it comes to revealing how to world and magic system works. I hate reading a story only to learn in the first chapter what the level of godhood already is, no mystery... Hopefully we continue to slowly learn about the world because so far I'm excited to keep reading.

I don't see what the big deal is. Harems can be done right, if we aren't playing pokemon. It's just more interesting and probably easier if the females actually grow with the MC with their own backstories, instead of just Inserting female names to then rinse and repeat every 10 chapters. Don't get me wrong though, I prefer any romance over no romance, as long as the story is good. Unless you where telling a story of a monster or robot, absolutely no romance would be bad.

The novel cover should be those cute looking dinosaurs from the land before time lol. Instead we got a t rex with blood stains.. really hate when the two don't match.

So it's obvious the author is just messing around so I'll give it the pro's and con's. pro - It's a reincarnated into a snake.. that's about it. - the action is ok. con - the grammar is horrible. - obvious rip off of chrysalis but much worse. - The way you announce the change to first and third person is annoying. - Even though it is a fantasy there should be at least some common sense logic. - The system and leveling lacks detail. - The story jumps very quickly into action before we can really even get a feel of what's happening. - Again things happen just to happen.. I'm pretty tired of the same "English is not my native language" then don't write in English lol. This story is all over the place and I've only gone through the first 10 chapters. The author is just writing on the fly instead of actually Mapping out the story. 2.5/5

I'm sorry and you are right, I can't judge where the story will go in the future. However it's not hard to figure out if a novel is dark or light hearted early on. I was just expecting something a bit more dark that's all. If you think I'm wrong then please explain to me so I can keep reading it.