Blackturtle

This is a masterwork novel and there's only a few like it in my opinion. The start of the novel is normal and maybe can be considered as boring but for those who decide to continue they will find the hidden treasure here...The MC is very powerful

Wow. The work is good. The pacing of the story is measured and stable and nothing has felt too forced so far. My main criticism is that the author is a bit inexperienced and this shows in his character design and use of suspense.

A well written book. I enjoy every description of the characters. (MC) actually. And (yes) it's a very promising novel (if) only the author can make that possible. finish up the novel.

you're just a smart ass!

Subtle creepiness ;)

only three star? :(

Thank you (so much) I'm really glad you pointing out my errors. I'll take full note to see they never occur. I appreciate your comments. (all of it)

thanks for reading.

Thank you so much for your review (appreciated by me) I'll look forward to making scenes less complicated.

Thank you so much. And (yes) your comments has really been a motivation for me.(thanks). I have put the book (Hidden Edges) to a pause. (Sorry). But you can also check out my new release. 1. Seduction: the path to freedom 2. The color of night Thanks. Well, did you just say you're a super girl. Lol. I hope you're doing well, even as you're super busy. Take it easy on yourself and don't forget to breath and drink water. Thanks. Love you too ;)