Aceofhearts

Yes! Its here...😂😂😂.. a lovely story that im happy to review... hahah...this is a unique one! A genuine one! Hope for a good story.... i support this novel...😆😆😆😆😎😎😎😎😘😘😘

Yes! Its here...😂😂😂.. a lovely story that im happy to review... hahah...this is a unique one! A genuine one! Hope for a good story.... i support this novel...😆😆😆😆😎😎😎😎😘😘😘

Yes! Its here...😂😂😂.. a lovely story that im happy to review... hahah...this is a unique one! A genuine one! Hope for a good story.... i support this novel...😆😆😆😆😎😎😎😎😘😘😘

I didn't expect it to be quite nice. It'd really interesting to read. I like the updates too. It gives more to read every day. Keep posting more chapter.

Great chapter

Brilliant start

What a bloody start.

I’m giving them all a 5 because you executed them perfectly. honestly, world background, and character design deserved more than a 5!!! I loved how descriotive it was, it flowed easily and I felt like I was standing right there. I’m also a fan of an epic plot, and I can’t wait to see how this story will end!!! Greak work!!!!!!!!

The characters so far have all been interesting, fun and engaging. The updates have been regular. Story in intriguing and has been developing well so far keeping me interested in what's to come. Only reason I didn't give the world 5 stars is just that there hasn't been enough time to flesh it out yet meaning so far it's been good, but not enough to say if it will become amazing, just stay good or become less good. Definitely interested in learning more about the world though.

I have only just started reading and already I hope to see the character develop more with his system and read what he will do with it I hope you don't leave the system out too much.