kamran_ein

This is really good so far, nice development and it's nice having another mandolorian story out that looks well done so far

spending a ton of time in this arc, and it feels almost like word vomit over and over going into the training and explanations of other characters, but there's almost no substance. I get there has to be character development but it's a little much, I feel like I've read the same chapter for the last 6 updates

So far this is actually really good. The backround and development are great, Grammer I'd good and I found I couldn't stop reading until I read all the chapters in one sitting. This has the potential to be one of the more solid naruto fanfics I've seen on here if the author keeps this up. good work 👍

all I can say is.... CAN I PET THAT DAWG, lol this is pretty good so far.

I get your continuing the story from the other author, but it's word for word so far, the exact same, why not just release the rest of the chapters and continue the story. Just wondering why your dragging it out

Not a bad start. not going to lie, I'm pretty hooked already and I was bumbed when I read all the chapters so far in 20 min. hurry up and post more author, and I'll dump all my power stones lol

As of chapter 7, the background and development are pretty solid so far. the pacing isn't too fast or slow, in my opinion. It's still quite early on, but I'm looking forward to seeing how the story further unfolds

red bull

Chapter length is surprisingly long but is so nice with so few chapters out, it's satisfying knowing that I'll get to enjoy the story progressing and not be frustrated with a short chapter and left hanging. The world backround and set up is very well done so far, and its a really enjoyable read so far for me. Looking forward to future updates, thanks author for the good work 👏

lol I've learned that lesson with other stories, but everytime I hold out hope