"We may have experience a thousand things in life, travel countless of place, taste different kinds of food and live our mundane life, but still the end goal of all things is simply death."
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Unnecessary introduction of new character.
The start of the downhill.
When is the mc gonna wake up?
I would injure his right hand again and left hand if I was the setter.
If you are going to continue to let the mc have this kind of behavior, you might as well rewrite your knb fanfic instead. I'm sick of the mc being so crazy, but still so useless. All of those chapters that you are writing about him doing whatever he wants feels so useless because there is no progress in the story.
Why don't you just kill this boring ass mc? One dimensional character, cringe as fuck.
He just awakened his memories three months ago, meaning he already made memories before that with his family. Read it again you idiot
His first magic is the most useless thing that he got in the treasure chest
I think Waver got a comic about spider-man, just like how Gil got a game.
Party till your wasted