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highlight with brackets [ ] the thoughts of Lucifer

Chapters are a bit short

Nen*

Not a more interesting power system than cursed energy. I don't understand why you chose a copy over the original. in the end, would not allow him to lay a good foundation for the powers of the city and would fit into other worlds that have senjutsu or ki.

someone decided to relax by retelling the first part of JoJo?

It started out interesting, albeit with some hiccups in the plot that I could ignore, but after the events of Trihexa began, the story descended into some kind of stupid absurdity. from my point of view, the author should not have created an apocalypse in his home world out of nowhere (it was very a strange decision (I could have simply chalked it up to hallucinations and used it as a springboard for character growth), not to mention the fact that with such a character it was necessary to completely move away from canonical events and develop his story in the setting, like Slash / dog did. Let's add to this empty characters that don't evoke emotions + a strange decision with a child. author if you are reading this then know good stories in There aren't that many dxd settings, and many of them deviate completely from canon so their characters can breathe. and if you want to write something else based on dxd, then I hope you will make a more local story with an emphasis on the folklore of your home country where gg does not become some kind of super deicide, but builds interaction with the environment and grows with those around him

I need more! it's a good story with a slow pace where gg doesn't get stupidly strong through the system in a few days. well done interactions between characters. your improvements to the dxd magic system are also quite good. I hope you don't quit