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great another system with no context for how strong it makes him monster strength sounds like garp levels but if so it's too op too fast.

given this bond its gonna be really hard to make a dance happen naturally I guess alicante could cause it alone but now many more lords wont join her due to there being a Male heir.

There's literally no reason for her to be the heir now that she has a brother of equal age. Any ambition she has is artificial to the story that or we have to assume shes just power hungry which is possible, but everything about her society would mold her to see her brother as the heir that or her father loves her so much more than her brother in this story that he still makes her the heir while knowing it would cause a civil war.

Lott is a joke to everyone after all they would be his knights Morgan is queen but that doesn't make her above the already ruling king.

mentioning Morgan over the king of the land there in is kinda rude. Even if she offers them to be knights they would still be sworn to king lott as it's his kingdom.

You can literally take Jon with by just saying cat hates him so need sent him to the neck so hes still with family but away from his hat filled wife and lyanna went with as Jon's nanny I just solved so much right there.

Realisticly the mc should still hate or dislike her but now hes just kissing her shes basicly done nothing to earn that and he spent the early chapters try to say he wasn't the old love sick Andrew but hes getting closer to it just stronger now.

I dont know if this is impressive a commonly made mistake with systems is not giving context to the stats or his age.

says hes fond of the tribe then in a few sentances he says he cant wait to get away from the tribe???

each other. acting like there not brothers I'm so confused.