Shuree143

stupid

I hated this chapter.

and this is way too forced just to create tension and drama in the story. It's getting a bit stale in the end. And the way Aiden is going to deal with this is a bit stupid. He should have a more reliable plan in order to not implicate himself, at the same time, still doing the right thing to do. Sheesh...

And I read the succeeding chapters, where he became unconscious (Deadpool's powers were deemed useless by the author at that time, claiming that it was not yet activated. I wonder why, but the author explained because the x-gene was not yet activated. Then, the mc stood next to the sun. This alone should have increased his powers more than the adult counterpart that have not absorbed solar energy, which means exponential boost. We know kryptonians grow stronger as they age, but it's not a good reason to determine their strength, but how much solar power they absorbed and the type of solar power, regardless of how long they are in contact with it. This should have made his power immensely stronger, but nah, he is still weak. For this reason alone, it is safe to say that the author lacks the knowledge of what superman is capable of, because he should have become very capable despite being young.

what's your basis to say that the Smallville superman is pathetically weak? I'm just curious. like, I've watched the episodes as well, so I also am very familiar with the plot, so where in that show can you confirm that he is pathetically weak?

grammar is good. character design is a 1 for being stupid and bland, with no character development. world building is okay. there have been many stories with similar plot, only this time it's straight VR, which is kinda interesting but poorly executed. overall, I recommend this to anyone who don't have anything to read, but if you're looking for groundbreaking or fun novel w/ a fun mc, then this is not it.

stupid reasoning. anyway, I'm just gonna read the free stuffs to claim the pass and points.

please stop explaining, you're just making the author dumber.

stupid. many already watched the game, so the quality of the game is assured. whatever.

okay. I can safely say that this novel is just another one of those creating games type with stupid mc.