SonGoku0_0

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So far so good :D This a refreshing story. The characters are capturing and fun to read as you follow this story. Keep it up!!

16 is already here :D

Stary ;-; ja to pisałem po angielsku nie po polsku ;-;

Nice Novel. Good start. What is most attractive to me you can't guess what will happen next. Keep on writing Author Good job!!!!!!!

So far good novel with good story. I like the main character and his growth along the way. So far, there are still few chapters. I'll be back here when there be more of them. Keep it up :D

Hello there, dropping my review here :D I must say that you have interesting story with nice plot. Characters development seems good. Keep it up!

Interesting story with something new in the genre. First-person view is rather rare, but it is easy to get used to. There are few chapters so far, and they are slow paced. I am waiting for more ;)

New edited version :D

I have not deliberately deleted your comments. But by fixing the mistakes in these paraphrases, they seem to have disappeared. ;-; Sorry