Dylan_Perkins

Okay, I want to be serious here. This is a story that I have enjoyed from beginning to end the writing quality has improved massively over time.The story was peak. That's all that can be said. Thank you for this amazing experience. And I hope whoever sees this review will feel the same way. When they read this story.

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Hey, if it takes you a few days to cook up something really good. Take your time.

Does that debuff stay there for the long time or is it something he can break through? Like can he use the frenzied flame to burn that away? Could he learn ghost flame.

Is it only humanoid creatures like Lizard men or humans and elves that he can turn into mummys. Or can anything be called a mummy?

The way that battle went was actually pretty good. I just wish it went on for longer. Keep up the good work, man.👍

He would be a pretty good pick. It just depends if you want to focus on technology or straight brawling or possibly delve into magic like Magnus.

That sounds amazing. Please do that. It's gonna be very hard to figure out which type of primary you want, though. I'm not sure. Which one will be the best for it though. It will be a fun experience to read through.😁

I say leave it how it is. Use this as a learning point to make your story better as you go on. I find this story very entertaining. Don't work too hard and burn yourself out on it. Trying to rewrite stuff.

I don't like this at all.😑