JabbaDaButt

Started this when there was just 200 chapters, now 3 years later, here I am. Good book

Read up to chapter 56, not terrible just spread way too thin. Bunch of characters and abilities and systems introduced one after another with almost no real time devoted to developing or explaining them. Classic Wish Fulfillment MC who goes from nobody to super OP god among men. A good example of what I mean by spread too thin is how only about 40 shortish chapters in, with barely any time devoted to developing his two wives he starts with. MC already has a new third wife and adopted her daughter. Make the core characters interesting and not just anime character stereotypes of “Buff Battle Maniac Girl” or “Silent library nerdy girl” or “Perverted Evil Young Master” make them seem like real people not just surface level personalities. Good luck to author though, has promise but I’ll be dropping

Webnovel making you pay to read MTLed chapters should be criminal. Sucks that the first 300 chapters are good just for some random translator to run it through google translate and call it a day without even proofreading.

Light slows down when it comes in contact with gravity. The reason black holes are just black is because no light is escaping it’s gravity.

Love the author and have read each of his 3 books, Profane Prince, this, and Nine Venoms. This one is good in that there is a lot of mystery and the story was just getting to the point where the MC was unleashing his fleshcrafting skills. Only problem I have is that after reading Profane Prince and then coming to this, I dislike that the father of the MC is gearing up to be the final main villain that is extremely overpowered and just gets power ups to always be better than the MC until the end. Author likes making the MC’s father be mysterious, in Profane Prince he ends up being the final villain mastermind, in this he has deva powers to counter MCs devil powers, and in Nine Venoms it’s hinted his father knew way too much about cultivation for being a normal human. Wish this would come back though, love the authors writing style, power systems, and storytelling

The species has to be able to utilize mana in a way where it does not enter their bodies since that is the rule of Gravitas, I personally would like to see an evolution based survival of the fittest continent where the strong get stronger by defeating and consuming their rivals then evolving to become better sort of like a beast kingdom and Darius rules since the strongest rules the kingdom and they all recognize Darius as the strongest, but that does not utilize the mana rules of Gravitas so idk.

Honestly, I loved the first 310 or so chapters, translation was good, world building and power system had some good ideas, story was developing and enough to keep me interested. This book really focused on the storylines of different players and how the gaming community would interact with a game like in the book. However, I rated this so low because it went on a long almost year long break with no updates, now it is back and the translation has taken a nosedive in quality, it seems almost machine translated with no proofreading. Recommend first 300 chapters, unless they fix the translation, don’t bother past that

There’s also Arek vs Eric. But my personal favorite of the translator’s laziness is how Battle Online is now also War online and Punitive Expedition Online

I bet Agromin is gonna escape and spread some lie that Izroth backstabbed or ambushed the righteous Zouren

If Izroth doesn’t kill Zouren, I’ll be upset, dudes been asking for it this whole time and if he lets him go then zouren will just get in Izroths way again