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abcdefgxyz1233 years ago發表The story is great! The plot gets even better as the story progresses. The characters also felt genuine and not too stereotypical. There are few chapters but intriguing pace and almost no grammatical mistakes. I hope that there would be more chapters in the future! Keep up the good work!
- abcdefgxyz1233 years ago發表
Duh! Isn't that a trade? What greater profits? what investing?
- abcdefgxyz1233 years ago發表
...Duh! I see people are expressing their dissatisfaction towards his mother. Man, I wonder how the earth would be if everyone is same as commenters expressed.
- abcdefgxyz1233 years ago發表
Nice start. promising prologue. let's see if it's any interesting as prologue.
- abcdefgxyz1233 years ago發表
Hmm...I give the novel this rating. First of all the grammar is smooth enough for a good read. Author has done good work to make this work a potential masterpiece. Now why I called it a masterpiece?? Here it is. This is the only book that made me feel like buying chaps if it goes premium. Overall it's so good. Keep it going, I'mma support you from shadows mate.
- abcdefgxyz1233 years ago回復 Dante_Luca
Let's see...
- abcdefgxyz1233 years ago發表
Nice start!
- abcdefgxyz1233 years ago發表
The story is great! The plot gets even better as the story progresses. The characters also felt genuine and not too stereotypical. I hope that there would be more chapters in the future! Keep up the good work!
