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people please for the LOVE of god. Try to think in character, a lote of chapters in, and the bases of the character already have been stablished. One thing thinking that this character doesnt fit in your taste and another to say that is out of character/force.Yes, some parts could have been introduce better in with less clichés, but in general this character maintains itself, It was obvious that this was going to happend, since he saved the elves was obvious.Really, so many comments without thinking not for what is optimal, but if is in character and is coherent. Again, It could be better (in my opinion longer parts will be better, but in webnovel thats a risky gamble for everyone)
well im sad no one yet posted this:Truly, a terrifing dragon
IT IS TIME
why? they are cute.look into his eyes and say otherwise
Why so many people dislike the idea of everyone having a system? I find It interesting, and intriging