Mad_Mace

I thought it said back when he left the Blue Planet that his dad was secretly a powerful battle pet warrior. Am I misremembering, or did the author forget?

what about his most trusted friend betraying him in the attack? sounds like a mistake to me

one should be won when talking about Karos' previous performances

I agree that it's worth waiting for. It may have started similarly, but I believe you've done a good job of deviating from TBATE with the war arc. Looking forward to what comes next.

*there it is

I can't wait to see what classes his underlings (counting the mage kid at the start) get. should be interesting.

so far so good, though I can't help but wish there were more updates. some of the best writing this site has to offer, so it's rough when you're waiting on the next release, even if it's only a matter of hours.

I love serving as an office

*don't want

if anything, I'd just remove "apparently"