Kino63

What else did she see? in one of those futures she must have learnt the corruption

succubus is such a well written statement, so much intent with that one word.

Make the most boring bland system kingdom builder you can think of. This is it just with fake reviews and translation done by bing.All inconsistencies and mistakes have been pointed out by comments none have been fixed. How this novel is trending is honestly a complete mystery to me.I understand that there is some work put into this and on the off chance I'm wrong and there's a slight amount of care put into the translation, I apologize.

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Right from the start it's was lightly implied that the only one to survive would be Kim. With Sunny saying the cohort would be built around her dispute her average combat ability because of her high synergy with Sunny himself. (or words to that effect). No other member works well directly with Sunny, as long as sunny has Kim he has a reformible cohort.The ironic part of this is Lusters selfless sacrifice means he gets out with his life. which is more than can be said about the other 4 expendables. Although the healer is only missing presumed dead.

have a girl attempt to stop MC from going outside in extremely elaborate ways as the outside is dangerous. It should be fun if the schemes are crazy enough that the MC has a bit of trouble weaving his way though the mess if an overprotective yandere.

While that was a massive amount of fluff, it is nice to see a story actually consider public opinion and reputation.

Honestly I'm in agreement with a few people here 5 should be a decent number to go for with 6 as a maximum. Your chapter lengths will mean any more won't really be possible without having a girl not written about for weeks on end. Which in turn will mean personiltys will drift by accident lowing story consistency.

If ever there was a novel ruined by current trends it's this one. This story has a great premise which I'm sure alot of us have thought up in the past, so there's alot of curiosity in anothers take on a plot line we all know but isn't written about alot. Guns being introduced into a classic magic based fantasy world by your truck-kun summoned MC. Now why is this ruined by current trends, simply put the system or goldfinger. The MC is a world renowned weapons designer and outside a occasional remark he might as well be local Walmart toilet cleaner as it literally means nothing as the system does everything related to weapons. Why is a world renowned weapons designer not designing weapons? The system. This story would be so much better is it leaned into those weapon designer routes but nope gotta grind out so many sales with this system instead of just making my own weapon from scratch. A great concept ruined by a horrible choice of MC or tag. Just pretend the MC is a high schooler like every other iseikai and you will enjoy the novel as dispute it's glaring flaw is a really good iseikai.

Fun fact this trap was common in WW2 after Dday. But it was piano wire at head hight while driving. It was such a big problem that all jeeps were modified to counter this threat.