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particle style should hurt him and kill him if it catches all of him. Lava style should hurt him. Rember that Pakara is either to be born or is alive already and she has scorch style which should be effective against his elementization

that was a pretty good twist. gave me Sherlock vibes.

change the weapons for weaponized gauntlets. or the weapons are for his future party members. or scrap the idea and send him to battle naked I guess.

drop the twins on him

went from 5 chapters to 2. I liked the danmachi story. first I thought it was good paced. soon leading up to a quick timeskip no jutsu

I like this story alot. I just wonder when he'll get his elemental kenki genki training. also I honestly hope Sasuke doesn't get with Sakura. literally a waste. he should get with someone who has a lightning or fire affinity. or multiple people who have either affinity. he'll even karin would be a better choice of Sasuke.

I think 14-19 page chapters are pretty good. that in a large font size since I like to read bigger words. all and all see like a pretty good bloodline. kinda like sage body with boosted senses. I like it. keep up the good work.

its all good I just started reading it today and didn't get the notice. confused the h*ll outta me though. every time I tried to reload it something else got deleted.

the synopsis just changed.

don't worry bro. some stories take weeks to release chapters and don't give you a heads up. Your works fire bro.