Kpnovellover

quick updates please. waiting 15 days for an update breaks the flow

this story is awesome!!!!!!

Simon?

it seems there's a typo in this paragraph

before it was 2 minutes right ?

more chapters please

first of all,I'm no expert.this is just my opinion as a reader.author you are doing a good job writing the scene.but you are dragging this scene across multiple chapters.your description of the situation paints a vivid picture.but i think you should add some sounds as well.like moaning sounds or something.because after a while just readers will lose interest in it.

can you add more details in the character list?atleast add affiliations. It's hard to keep track.and maybe something like a relationship status at least?ex. lover, friend, enemy, etc.

if this is the way the story will keep going, then the author should put the ntr tag.

where's the MC?