EyesightLikeTheSun

This book is clearly not for impatient people, the progress for the storyline is way too slow. I've read till 300+ chapters and 2 things I want to happen is happening way too slow. First, faceslapping and revenge. I wish Rio will get revenge on Alfred and those bastards soon but I do understand that revenge is best serve cold. Secondly, is the Author really not giving the memories of the girls back? Then, whats the point of introducing it in the first place?(Probably will be explain in the future but I'm too impatient.) Another thing I feel Author should improve is on the climax of an arc and increase the suspense and stakes but I do understand he just started writing so I will let him off. I do like how he kill noah though and his Eclipse which I think should be mention more. Even though I said lots of negative things I do see potential for it being good thats why i gave a 4*. :)

Weird that the author didn't mention that its okay for incest in this world though.

How is Rebecca engaged to Rio, arent they cousins so blood related to each other?

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more cringe than sweet tho

I mean yeah I guess so but it's kinda sweet too.

Cringe how so?

This is actually good. It start out as a bit eh but after a while it's actually good. Just be patient it will be okay............................

I love it. Keep up the good work author. It's a unique direction form the other fanfics.....................................................