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a 4 year old playing politics. Reading this novel killed some of my brain cells.
dudeeee, it's like you dont know anything about naruto at all. You only know naruto himself but the side characters... not much? huh. And shisui betraying the leaf? are you high?
and fuinjutsu really??
dude what kind of stat padding is that? if you dont have the facts or you cant make an educated guess, don't write any info.... and what the heck was that shadow guard??
reading this was a torture for me. btw it's just my own opinion and preference. Don't be discourage, continue writing author.
The way you write, you are butchering it. and the character's intelligence doesn't live up with their name. I thought he was supposed to have higher IQ? but what the heck was that confession?
Not your average Chinese novel and there is no Chinese propaganda here. The author gave life to the characters, they're not just one dimensional characters. Settings and plots are good, a new breath of time travel concept. A little bit of polishing and it can rival top Chinese novels. Downside? it was dropped at 665
a mob character?
your timeline is wack. and I understand because the series itself have problems when it comes to age math