Cath_bule

I gotta say that your story is good cause there is not so many BTTH FF, it's really good especially the story development. Though I didn't like first part of it, the way you you put MC against the OC made it up. I like this but I still expecting more than this, you know the title "ancient" did he travel past? or what?

the previous one is a flashback chapter while the previous from previous one is the normal chapter

thanks for advice, I know English is my 2nd language so yeah, I knew that there is so many mistakes when I read it myself, but you know I kind of busy lately, mostly possession and verb they arere kinda confusing some time, again thank you.

good to see you here, thanks

no sorry to disappoint you

Y, por favor, no solo dé malas críticas solo porque no le gustó o porque no hay una escena r-18, si cree que todavía no son suficientes para ayudarlos a mejorar corrigiendo su error. gracias.

Vete a la mierda, si no te gusta

who knows what will happen, I write something that comes to my mind.

that was for another story my friend. for now be patient and enjoy it 😉