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Talked —> Spoken The verb to talk takes a direct object, i.e talk TO someone/talk ABOUT someone. In this case, you are indirectly referencing the person who has been talking (technically the subject is what was said and not WHO said it) so the verb to speak is used. ‘Spoken like’ is a very commonly used English phrase

as long as Tana is free to do {rest is fine}

Yuna —> Yuan

Change has is to just is (remove the word has).

Your theory is that next, the key to the next level… You need a comma to break up the phrases. I had to read the sentence a couple time to properly get it as my mind autocorrected while reading.

Own instead of won.

Re-reading and I cackle every time. Raon is just evil. A perfect example of him being more devilish than Wrath or anyone in the Devildom. I really do look forward to what would happen if Raon ever went there one day.

yep, its unfinished

and that is why I'm not tempted to spend any money on this site. Not even "free" money cause it's not worth it. There is nothing worse than starting to read a story, get invested, only to find out it's unfinished. Then as you look for similar novels, you start to notice that some are clearly "Copy & Paste" stories, so you are even further jaded. i don't even read as muchbon the site anymote ans there's only 2 Webnovel only original authors that I read on here. the rest of my novels are still bookedmarked but I haven't read most in years.

It’s about time something surprised them in the Empire.