NowGoWithTheFlow

A fustraiting novel to read an really Unrealistic as well. First guns or even sci fi guns are overwhelming to people with swords an bow. Don't expect a one man army though with a gun just kill them an his private bodyguards. Second MC makes bad decisions alot of the time. Third to fast pace an chapters are short. Fourth I just don't like the MC at all. Also sometimes MC or author will forget some of the rewards MC gets an will never mention again. I am saying all this because this plot line I haven't seen done before an was really excited to read so I had high expectations of this novel. Though I was let down.

A ok read. Though why write a unfinished book? MC gets level up through his actions but I see no system for all the points or attributes an feels unfinished. Also you won't know what day it is or how many days has passed, right now I am assuming 1 chapter is day 1 an so on. Alot of MC survival action are half ass. For example wild banana will not be edible, a coconut doesn't hold enough water for survival, also no mention of guting the fish or sank. What I don't like the most is there is no night watch, like really you got four hostle men an wild animals to watch out for. Author basically skims the survival details an assuming they're actually right while not right. For example doesn't write details of cooking the fish, just said make a fire an cook then moves on. This whole book feels really rushed. This could be a great book but author wasted it's potential.

Well this is basically a copy of The strongest fleet commander. Though names have been changed an a few stuff either been added or removed. The grammar is ok, the chapters are long enough for me. I don't like the MC, MC is to cliche arrogant basically all the bad things you don't want a MC to have this MC has. Which will make the readers hate the MC. I love the way you improve the stat system from what it was in the strongest fleet commander.

Read chapter 1 an 2 then skip to chapter 18. Everything else between is MC moaning about he the MC is human an will always be weak compared to sayins. Slow plot though a new take on the original story, expanding minor character backgrounds. Also more on the superpower school. A ok read to pass the time.

After chapter 25 it's getting worse. More than half of each chapter is ryeming an poems that add nothing to story. While the other half gives you vague explanation of what's happening. Please author fix this.

Great novel. Chapter 25 an 26 was a let down though. The rest was intriguing to read. I didn't like those poem you put in each chapter. The chapters are long enough, great grammar while the story is so much different than the original while still keeping tanya personality.

Looks like I will stop reading this since you nerf MC system for no reason. Before that book was great. Long chapters, grammar was ok, the story was slow but intriguing.

Don't expect much from this novel. I looked at other books author made an looked like only a few chapters before being dropped. I hate the gacha an also this is to rushed. Don't read is my recommendation.

One thing I hate happening is when a system messes with the MC in a bad way. Why the heck you call this the one piece world it's not. It may resemble one piece but it's not. Also I read isekai because I like mc changing the story themselves but this no it's just sh*t story. The MC is in a already changed an different one piece world that doesn't make sense.

This book was written in a way that the author only understood. First couple chapters I know you summon goku, but which goku is what I wanna know. Like was goku a child, what's his power level or what arc did you summon goku from. Also since your in dragonball universe an summoned goku, will there be 2 goku or did you just summon goku from the same universe? An really I just don't like you summoning characters from same universe it makes everything complicated.