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I think you don't feel it, whatever, I won't change my review, you are free to believe what you want, I gave my opinion, but by deleting it you are contradicting yourself, I read it and gave my opinion, if others read it and evaluate based on it the whole fic is their problem, I don't see the point of having to lick your feet and improve your supposedly big ego if you are not able to take criticism.

Thanks for chapter

You just read what you say, what do you call a memory wipe that simply erases your partner from your mind? A mind control if we are blind a bastard. And if they only fall more in love with the protagonist it means that there will not be a damn conflict in the relationship if it is not in an early phase, do you really have to use that argument instead of working on relationships? Look for heartbreaker from worm and you will be truthful because I say it is mind control or a more well-known example would be silk's pheromones that make her sexually attracted to spiderman, it is ambiguous but it is still. I will watch until I consider it artificial and I will lower my rating as it progresses and if I end up hating this series more it is because of you

Sorry if it is not understood, I use a translator since my English is somewhat bad, you realize that Emma's entire character is her past relationship with Abe, yes she can be a good character but as seen in the second trilogy once this was clarified she lost prominence, with the other it would be the same, the fact that your biggest problem in the relationship is simply solved by meeting the children takes away weight from her falling in love, if an ability to make someone faithful is it really faithful? No, since it is an external presence that manipulates someone, if you want to make a story where you collect waifus as if they were trading cards, better say it now. Regardless if there is action one can dedicate the romance and drama to the protagonist, and if I am honest with you, you want to make an action story with a system that really shouldn't be the main focus for obvious reasons, but it is your discretion to decide that. The biggest problem is that you started well, I wouldn't give it 5 out of 5 but 3 out of 5, but you were doing pretty well introducing the world and characters, but when will he get god-like powers? The end of the second book? If it is op the mc, naturally you will have to find a way to strengthen the villain according to the context of the world or add another central theme to it, since, being the most powerful, why would we watch the story if we know he wins?

It was going well until the author introduced the use of skills that manipulate emotions and glasses to get more waifus, honestly it was going well but he decided to screw up everything promised in chapter 13

Why don't they go to therapy or give them arcs with Jacob, let the MC go with others before them, feel pain, fall in love with him but he rejects them for those feelings, let them overcome that love when they see their grandfather happy, you could promise a good story but you decided to screw around in the style of virgins without a girlfriend who can't learn what life is like (sorry if I sound rude but I recently saw Worm and Heartbreaker is a bastard who does the same thing you write only he doesn't hide it)

Now I'm starting to hate this, you said there would be drama and romance but unbreakable love ruins everything that should be drama, basically that's the arc of the relationship with Emma and you just solve it with mind control, how disgusting

A question, have you read the second trilogy of books?

Now I understand why they say there will be a lot of drama in your work, I have read the 6 books already and I agree that it will be a lot to work on and more so now there are two

Then can you make a ben 10 story?