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i'm surprised to see i'm enjoying this novel

its a great story, thanks for the storyy

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thankyou very much love your work btw

ohh sorry about that then but well in this chapter you write uchiha madara then shoto todoroki and i belive shoto is a first name i guess?

sry in advance if this annoyed you but this has been stuck in my head for some times if you don't know Japanese name has different placement from other country like [Uchiha Itachi], Uchiha is their surname and Itachi is their name if it is the normal one [Itachi Uchiha] if you decide to use the normal way of writing their name please use it all the time and vice versa. because i see that you mixed them and i kind of disturbed by that. if you choose the Japanese way ex: 1st bakugo katsuki 2nd uchiha madara 3rd todoroki shoto 4th uchiha obito 5th iida tenya 6th ... then if you choose the normal way ex: 1st katsuki bakugo 2nd madara uchiha 3rd shoto todoroki 4th obito uchiha 5th tenya iida well thats all i have to be said and im really sry if this do distrub you. thankyou. hope you read this @author :)

*iida*