mila_islam

I like the premise of the story but the gramemar and spelling are so bad it hurt. I can ignore some spellingg errors but its like every sentence words are wrong or misssing. Please get someone to spell check or download Grammarly

I would like to see you right a femail mc and if the story was yuri I think it would be fun and interesting do to how diferent it would be

what happened to your websit it is not loading any chapters

Bro I dont now if its just me but I do not care about dxd I just skip it all to get to the kingdom stuff at this point you have made him so overpowered I dont care what he does nuthing can hurt him

Does any one now what happend to them or did the auther forget about them

bro why Haven’t you uploaded in 5 months if you droped the story at least say it

The story is really good but the main character is a bit to much of a s l u t for me so I dropped the story xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

the grammer it hurts

I dont now what it is but the romance just feels of