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don't they mean Victor?
Natalie Rushman, it's her go to cover name
This is your story take however long, you need to make it feel right to you. I think the pace you have now is great. The background and pacing work very well together.
I feel each chapter pacing is great. It gives you a feel of time running out, that they need to make it quick because they will be attacked or restricted soon.
Emma Frost
1 definitely