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In winter, the lone swordsman slashed his sword in front of him. There lay a legendary ancient dragon at his feet with multiple similar creatures laying around the area.
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Polar_Tempest3 years ago發表Thx for the Chap!! 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪
- Polar_Tempest3 years ago發表
Thx for the Chap!! 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪
- Polar_Tempest3 years ago發表
Personally I like both of them they are very interesting in their own ways the original was progressing in an interesting direction idk why people would complain. it was already stated why he went to UA and the reasons for his actions. The second one however seems a bit strange like with the over reaction of the people around and the fight in the beginning was strange since if the both of them had blood on there swords and the surroundings it can be interpreted as they had already killed each other's people, it wouldn't make since in an emotional view even if they have respect in each other's strength.
該書已被刪除。 - Polar_Tempest3 years ago發表
Thx for the Chap!!! 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪
- Polar_Tempest3 years ago發表
Thx for the Chap!! 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪
該書已被刪除。 - Polar_Tempest3 years ago發表
Thx for the Chap!! 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪
- Polar_Tempest3 years ago發表
Thx for the Chap!! 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪
- Polar_Tempest3 years ago發表
Thx for the Chap!! 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪
- Polar_Tempest3 years ago發表
Thx for the Chap!!! 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪
- Polar_Tempest3 years ago發表
Thx for the Chap!! 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪 🍪